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Three by ~theladydimora:icontheladydimora:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


shine, shine, shine
oh smiling face in the marble
don't you know you're being stepped on too?
still you smile under all that trod over you
what is it that you hold?
some rock hard moral

(and lo!
the ravings of a madman are considered thusly as such!
where none may hear it as the Word of God
but these are not my words.
these are all to be found in books and poems
written by clergymen and soothsayers)

dot, dot, dot
the stars in the sky
one thousand minions of god
a calvery in armor of shinging white
on a battlefield of black
©2006-2009 ~theladydimora
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2/7/00

Yeah...walking 30 minutes to class in Bosont makes you think weird things...

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~SerotoninSage Mar 1, 2006, 8:02:51 PM
see, this one's actually alright. except the 'calvery in armor' in kinda tacky and because i know you, i attribute it to 'renn faire'... but i like the sound of it overall. it makes me think of a town crier reciting the poem..and it's fun to read.

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~theladydimora Mar 2, 2006, 4:50:34 PM
Hmm..interesting. You're the only person that has said they like this one. But I also don't really link this too much with my past in the SCA or Renn Faire. I think it was more of the groups and patterns and rhythms that the words made as I walked to school.

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